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This was chaotically interesting since I'm jumping in at chapter 4. You had me at *explosive* wine-shits. What I found enjoyable was that I understood that all the characters involved was in an urgency to get to their destination even if I didn't read the other chapters. (I tried...but now that I'm detoxing from Twitter, my attention span has come back) I didn't feel left out as a first time reader for this chapter. I like the dialogue and the narrators care free use of explaining things. Wine-shits / Samuel got stabbed in the ass. Those are nice little funny spots to break up the lore conversation between Lily and Corn. I have no idea why you name the boy Corn...but my first thought was: maybe he's a fan of the band Korn. No? Maybe? Just me? Also! I thought Samual's magic trick of disappearing and appearing was cool - such Doctor Strange vibes. But, it's limited right? I'm guessing it was towards the end. Very fun chapter. ❤️

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